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Rain. Is clear. Is moist, is all perceiving, all absorbing. I am standing in the rain, rain is soaking me through, soaking every inch of my skin. In my shoes it is slushing. Between the toes. Mixing with the lint. Churning a past. I have a lot of lint. I didn't empty my socks this morning. There wasn't any time. Only time enough to throw them out and run into the rain. I wait for the thunder. It doesn't come. I wait longer. I might have even waited longer.
Slowly I began to run. My shoes are pasted in the lint mortar. They are heavy on my feet. I try to run faster. It is not fast enough. The winds whirl around me. I want to go with them. I untie the laces. I keep untying them. There are many laces, and I had laced them all.
I step out of the cement blocks. I step into the air. I am no longer held. I hold myself.
The air is crisp, and full of moisture. The winds whip me around, and I am become a sky child. I laugh and the winds howl. I curse and the winds hurl. No one can touch me. No one can tame me. I am invincible in thought. Let all who would contain my life, would study my life, would attach cords and manipulate my life be lost in the wind of my laughter.
Go away. I am searching for the thunder cat.
My eyes are pealed, and there is no longer room to imagine the cement blocks before. Deathly lint, power so capable, so successful, so feeble. I rocket through the air, flipping and twirling, and swirling, the dark clouds are wrapped around my fingers. The rain is become my hair; blue and silver, silver lightning. I turn my head; they flow like dark, silken sheets. I turn to face the clouds. I bellow into them. They churn beneath my breath.
He is in there somewhere.
Knowing the message sent, I turn my cheek, and smile a hidden smile that only he could see. Then I begin to turn again. And I turn again. And again. And faster, and my hair, and the rain floats up behind my head, and twirls, and makes a sound. I wave my hands. I whirl and twirl, and nothing can defeat me. The clouds begin to twirl. The rains begin to move. They spin. Slow at first. They are hesitant. But they begin to catch on. They catch onto me. To my movement. To my momentum. To my noise.
I am the eye of the storm. I am the hurricane's climax.
I am the thundercat.
BOOM
I cry it. I stop. The clouds move suddenly away at my abruptness. And HE is there. Perhaps he was always there. Always watching. Even when I was churning in the murky lint. His skin is fur. Purple. Wet. Stuck into spikes with the sweat of the storm. His jaws. His tusks. His great yellow eyes. The darker than night horns. His great wings. Like dark sheets. The massive paws. Thick, merciless paws. He turns his head to look at the sky child. With his yellow eyes, he looks at me.
I grab his ear.
We dance.
Outside the thunder booms. I cannot lift my head to see the window. I cannot leave the room, to feel the rain. I cannot loose the cords that feed the drugs.
I cannot. I cannot. I cannot.
I look over to the calendar, hanging on the stale, white wall. It says it is April. April 1st.
Drool begins to seep out of the corner of my mouth. My bald head slides over.
A strange, hot tear begins to form.
April is my last month.
Slowly I began to run. My shoes are pasted in the lint mortar. They are heavy on my feet. I try to run faster. It is not fast enough. The winds whirl around me. I want to go with them. I untie the laces. I keep untying them. There are many laces, and I had laced them all.
I step out of the cement blocks. I step into the air. I am no longer held. I hold myself.
The air is crisp, and full of moisture. The winds whip me around, and I am become a sky child. I laugh and the winds howl. I curse and the winds hurl. No one can touch me. No one can tame me. I am invincible in thought. Let all who would contain my life, would study my life, would attach cords and manipulate my life be lost in the wind of my laughter.
Go away. I am searching for the thunder cat.
My eyes are pealed, and there is no longer room to imagine the cement blocks before. Deathly lint, power so capable, so successful, so feeble. I rocket through the air, flipping and twirling, and swirling, the dark clouds are wrapped around my fingers. The rain is become my hair; blue and silver, silver lightning. I turn my head; they flow like dark, silken sheets. I turn to face the clouds. I bellow into them. They churn beneath my breath.
He is in there somewhere.
Knowing the message sent, I turn my cheek, and smile a hidden smile that only he could see. Then I begin to turn again. And I turn again. And again. And faster, and my hair, and the rain floats up behind my head, and twirls, and makes a sound. I wave my hands. I whirl and twirl, and nothing can defeat me. The clouds begin to twirl. The rains begin to move. They spin. Slow at first. They are hesitant. But they begin to catch on. They catch onto me. To my movement. To my momentum. To my noise.
I am the eye of the storm. I am the hurricane's climax.
I am the thundercat.
BOOM
I cry it. I stop. The clouds move suddenly away at my abruptness. And HE is there. Perhaps he was always there. Always watching. Even when I was churning in the murky lint. His skin is fur. Purple. Wet. Stuck into spikes with the sweat of the storm. His jaws. His tusks. His great yellow eyes. The darker than night horns. His great wings. Like dark sheets. The massive paws. Thick, merciless paws. He turns his head to look at the sky child. With his yellow eyes, he looks at me.
I grab his ear.
We dance.
Outside the thunder booms. I cannot lift my head to see the window. I cannot leave the room, to feel the rain. I cannot loose the cords that feed the drugs.
I cannot. I cannot. I cannot.
I look over to the calendar, hanging on the stale, white wall. It says it is April. April 1st.
Drool begins to seep out of the corner of my mouth. My bald head slides over.
A strange, hot tear begins to form.
April is my last month.
Literature
Home.
The night is pitch-black all around, save for the uncountable mass of stars winking benevolently at me from the tarp of deepest indigo that hangs overhead. Everything feels suspended in that momentthe stars, the crescent moon, the sparse, gray-black clouds, this little island called Earth, and even myself. It feels as if my feet don't even touch the ground.
I feel as if I'm falling into them, the stars. There are so many of them, filling my field of vision, that I am taken by a sudden bout of dizziness and fall back into the Earth's gentle embrace. In response she twirls me around playfully, pulling me into a slow-motion
Literature
i.
Within blue eyes
anemone and starfish
abound, and seaweed eyelashes
move leisurely with the tides.
At sunset they sparkle,
lined with golden sand
and swirling without a sure direction,
becoming cloudy as a storm brews.
Beware, anger flashes across the surface,
where riptides catch the unwary
ships and sailors, wrecked
and broken amongst its depths.
Only the brave venture in,
attracted by the untameable,
roaring waves and sharp wind.
Eyes stinging, they enter the battle.
Slowly they themselves become blue,
the cold clinging to their skin,
sucking out all their warmth.
Then white as stone,
lips cracked and filled with salt
that leaves a bitter
Literature
In the Syllable
...then there is a way in diswaiting.
Dust some yellow sand covers,
here uncover bare bedding.
...suffusing red planes, blushed dunes,
under incidentally quilted blanket
wet as arid curves, as sounds.
...in a persistent pavement,
in a solemn unsuited promise,
some written words erase
some letters drip and soak
unto a perfuse miracle,
a dislocated split,
a letting go of...
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First non-poem in a while. I had to write it for a creative writing class. The instructions, literally, were as follows.
"Think of an "idea" for writing. The bigger and broader and less firsthand experience you have with this idea the better. For example, write bout life, love, death, homelessness, or illness in general. Write fast. Ramble. Think, don't try to see any one thing in particular. Put in lots of your feelings and ideas. Avoid images and specifics. Think out loud on the page. Don't focus your mind's eye on anything."
sigh. ambiguity. I'm not sure I followed them, since I kind of did focus. I'm not sure I could NOT focus, eventually. I can't say I see the point of doing so. Generally these type of things don't turn out so good. I'm glad this one did.
WW feedback: what do you think of the story? Of the metaphors? Is it clear who the narrator is, and how she is connected with the rest of the story?
"Think of an "idea" for writing. The bigger and broader and less firsthand experience you have with this idea the better. For example, write bout life, love, death, homelessness, or illness in general. Write fast. Ramble. Think, don't try to see any one thing in particular. Put in lots of your feelings and ideas. Avoid images and specifics. Think out loud on the page. Don't focus your mind's eye on anything."
sigh. ambiguity. I'm not sure I followed them, since I kind of did focus. I'm not sure I could NOT focus, eventually. I can't say I see the point of doing so. Generally these type of things don't turn out so good. I'm glad this one did.
WW feedback: what do you think of the story? Of the metaphors? Is it clear who the narrator is, and how she is connected with the rest of the story?
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Wow.
The imagery was amazing! I could clearly do a visual play-by-play of the entire piece! I like how the pace changes, and the imagery displays it, effortlessly.
The whole concept definitely connnects, because as the reader I felt as though it was all bam, bam, bam, and then ... *silence* .
Absolutely awesome (: